Well, I guess it is time I share this with others outside my small circle of friends. For those of you who hadn't seen my little rant in these forums about a thief who stole the hard copy of the original story, the few interested souls who expressed interest are to blame for me releasing it out for all who dare to read it. I wrote this tale for my own sake, as a challenge, not for any other reason. It is too large to be put in a forum post, so I will link it below; but, it is not too large that you could not read it in a day. It will be not my fault if you don't like it. Blame the others who encouraged me to continue on, to expand; or blame those who constantly asked me, "what happens next?" They could have easily said, "give it up," but they didn't, so here you go. Be patient, it may take a few seconds to load up.
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B3jUEd ... WU3UmZzUzQ